@Thavija Nandasiri yo this is great really, but when I was reading your copy I came on the part that said April 2024 like this year, that's a bit fast tracked but this must be a example copy right? but either ways the copy was good the only issue was the sentence's were too long try to write a it shorter 40-50 words each if you can. but I will rate this a 8/10

@Kanieshk Jain you have a lot of grammar mistakes, the copy kinda sounds childish and not serious, barely any use of persuasive words and make just doesn't give me the feeling I am looking for. I will rate this a 4/10

@Uros Pesic i agree can rate the copy from 1-10

@Idris Tobey can you rate it