@Ulhv Op You can do better with your copy I don't really understand much about calisthenics but the way you wrote your copy really doesn't persuade me to take action, it doesn't follow any clear structure because it looks like your cta is at the beginning and end of your copy and the title and hook just doesn't capture attention. a 3-4/10

@Luxurious Ngugi I don't know much about copy script writng because I am still learning how to write scripts but yours sound good a 7/10