Hey! Great vibes! However I think it would be really good for builsing your personal brand if you start into the video with who you are, what you are trying to do and what the video will be about. Keep in mind that a most people don´t know you so you need to establish a connection first. Why should they be listening to you? :) And I think you can answer that question pretty good! I wish you all the best bro! Never stop uploading
I like it! One comment tho: In my experience it is always better to start showing the person who talks to the viewer. Even if it´s just for a few seconds. Don´t start with B-roll if you can show a face :) It´s better for human connection, authenticity and therefore also: watchtime Nonetheless a great edit! Amazing