Im currently struggling with getting clients amd would love one on one training, i dont mind paying for it. I am a very good copywriter but a bad outreach, I dont seem to understand that side of things and i have accountability issues. I would prefer someone from a third world nation who would understand where im coming from. Tnx.
@'Shaheer' Scott I give it a 6/10 There was typo error in there but the story wasn't interesting enough, I suggest you go on reddit and search about the topic, you would see tons of real life stories. You can also make the copy more withy to generate more intrigue. WIIFM wasn't strong enough. It's a good place to start though. I personally think you should try to write for one of those gym coaches on IG, check out there content and write in theor brand voice. You would improve much faster and have all the stories, offer you need to write a great copy
Just wrote a new copy, tell me what you think https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ePf4RJsDZ9kuelaoA597GeznLI6IkLBbytCirkL1-sk/edit?usp=drivesdk Please be brutal 🙏
Pls rate and review https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SozMnPdHB7xObO054UlfL67epq-t2v2swsjz3krUcKw/edit?usp=drivesdk P.S - Really not confident in this one 😪