@Nick Price I've reviewed your copy. While you have a lot of good intentions, you're approaching certain things the wrong way. When you tell someone they changed your life, it DOESN'T put you in any favourable position to sell to them. How do you want him to feel like he needs YOU, when he is the one that changed your life? He now sees you as a fan. And fans are NOTORIOUS for wanting to take more from celebrities than celebrities benefit from them. This is why if you hype someone too much, they feel like you want to take from them instead of benefit their lives. You don't pedestalise someone and then tell them that they need you because you can help them. This is why guys fail with girls too.

@Priyanka Gurjar thank you

@Diederik Kroese I'll send you a DM

@Diederik Kroese I'm putting together some resources that I'll send you alongside the loom video.

@Khalaf Smii I've reviewed your copy. Great copy you have there 👍🏾 Work on the suggestions so your copy looks neat. Learn to space out your copy. You spaced out your copy but then had chunks of text in the areas you had texts.

@T C send em to my DM bro

@Raja Alangaran I'll review your copy today

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@Ahmad Bondogji I've reviewed your copy. I'll give you honest reviews. It may be painful, but imagine the elite copywriter it makes out of you. Work on these things, my friend - Space out your copy. Make it reader friendly. - Use better SL. Your SL introduced cognitive dissonance. It wasn't also congruent with your copy. - Give examples of belief bridge. - Rewrite your copy with a better structure and send to me. I'll review it personally.

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