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Biruk Habesha
19d ago in
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January 2 Email & Drop yours
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xjs31TElex_niIueS45b3d8aS6zRSN5lUUNRxzf9wxo/edit?usp=drivesdk
I want detail review & 1-10
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Seesdeep Singh
• 12d
waddup
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Seesdeep Singh
• 12d
anybody wanna connect to ig
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Seesdeep Singh
• 12d
here it is
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Yahya Cc
• 19d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H0UTJ9XGcluUVy_h22r43AxxH3b3NW5Ka1SesnnFsAU/edit?usp=drivesdk
This was written by chat gpt, I wrote the SL and changed a few things
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Biruk Habesha
• 18d
@Yahya Cc
I can't access
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Yahya Cc
• 18d
@Biruk Habesha
try now
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Adrian Marufu
• 19d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17e8loA6rP08MjzwPJ4FXEX_A8PJRFo22OKNsucex91I/edit?usp=sharing
Please tell me what I can improve on, and rate 1-10
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Abdou Ba
• 19d
@Adrian Marufu
Hey Adrian, I read your PAS copy and left some comments that might help you
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Adrian Marufu
• 19d
@Abdou Ba
I really tips, thanks a lot man🤝
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Tshego Demo
• 19d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X4KWEzs1DrdQ1FUROtG4W_4q5X22l8MY4v_o4knZd4A/edit?usp=drivesdk
This is my first email
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Biruk Habesha
• 18d
@Tshego Demo
i can't access
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Tshego Demo
• 18d
@Biruk Habesha
I fixed the permission
You can access pls🙏
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Sifiso Kutoane
• 15d
This is my email copy
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15o2y_GcEW2-7QBqJd0ZrhDrMtpHd9iBqbxe2vYVk29k/edit
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Seesdeep Singh
• 15d
LEAVE A SOLID REVIEW NOT ANY YAPPING! FIND ME REAL MISTAKES AND IM NOT A BEGGINER ! EVEN THOUGH MY FIRST MAIL OF 2025 RESPECT FOR THE GUY CHECKING MY MAIL LEAVE 1/10 REVIEW AND ALSO PUT COMMENTS IN
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pqzljJypcAvPYNBc6KkaSRNklFX0wcXCxkZucKhJL4c/edit?usp=sharing
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Sifiso Kutoane
• 12d
What’s good everyone here’s another email copy I’ve made
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16RVcNMhtqWqOdFvcH0U7N_rV7GPEhPj8TEA_W8YBgNU/edit
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Yahya Cc
• 19d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10QvW-I1-MHdGXnnjq3F1lyjX581__Chv-8iEY2UEgSI/edit?usp=drivesdk
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Biruk Habesha
• 18d
@Yahya Cc
8.2/10
1.Perfect story telling
2.I love What in for me in the first 3 line
3.Give some structure like bold in the right place or something
But its good
Keep going 🔥🔥🔥
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Adrian Marufu
• 19d
Just finished reviewing your email
@Biruk Habesha
, Check it out.
Overall 5/10
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Ravikant Sawant
• 19d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_u1-lqDxp9GD-QhqBRjzn5GlAk9RgjGOjspKDSBgY2E/edit?tab=t.0
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Biruk Habesha
• 18d
@Ravikant Sawant
7.8/10
1."Real estate is like marriage: if you don’t do your homework" perfect line
2.Change SL
3.Add some bold or bullet to break the reader eye
4.Weak CTA i don't know your CTA
5.Short & precise good
Keep going🔥
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Phoenix Slash
• 19d
Review (SL: ‘Piece Strategy’ a Secret No One Talks About)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RCO6Y8zr5pnOMYsWAeZ1jcBss-VS6KmU2i3D67wb_8M/edit?usp=sharing
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Biruk Habesha
• 18d
@Phoenix Slash
6.3/10
1.Content good
2.skyrocketed ,game changer,secret
Everybody know this come from Chatgpt
3.When you use different writing style
Use one in the main part
4.Don't use direct from Chatgpt
Keep going 🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Lado Stepaniani
• 19d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DrN2mb4IdBjwTLluAO1YvAuKJJJbWPTuv-q32F6vXkc/edit?addon_store&tab=t.0
be honest
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Biruk Habesha
• 18d
@Lado Stepaniani
7.2/10
1.Change the SL its long
2.Don't be needy when you say your program is good add some testimony
3.Tell what you're different from other
keep going 🔥🔥
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Lado Stepaniani
• 19d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/139Rr80WiGIQZlrBjoToxdMfTauojCkdkydKfitFLFpg/edit?addon_store&tab=t.0
another, be honest
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Biruk Habesha
• 18d (edited)
@Lado Stepaniani
7.8/10
1.Dead line email perfect
2."in fact, more than 1,000 students have joined and start building their dream
You can hear their stories too"
After this
Watch my students story or
Tell them about your student success
Because the reader need to see result
Keep going🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Td Fb
• 18d
Here is the Not Email (landing page).
Please give it a Mike Tyson review.
Niche- Consulting
Type- Sales page
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EfxunfkGdMu0-ZbdCh3kt0zQJfG5v0yCTdI7zrBrE-0/edit?usp=drivesdk
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Biruk Habesha
• 18d
@Td Fb
6.9/10
1.You're great
2.Where is your CTA
My sales page formula
1.Head line
2.sub head line
3.VSL
4.Click
button(CTA)
5.Bullet point in the box structure
6.Talk
about my self with side of my picture
7.Scroll stoper with
Belief shift & give value
8.Small bolled sub head line
9.Another scroll stopper
10.testimonial
11.My
unique work
12.Feature & benefit that how i help them
13.Give some Bonus
14.Click
button(CTA)
15.My
price list
&I give them 3 price list & the big price in the middle
Because we always choose the middle one
16.Click
button (CTA)
17.Disclaimer/ objection handle
Or urgency & scare
18.
Click
button (CTA)
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Seven Rue
• 18d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q-24tRiDQZ0Njffa5QUCZ4tL6WvOB5EndN6cUzyOxD0/edit?tab=t.0
(learning lesson format)
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Mzion E.
• 15d
Hey Ruth, how long have you been a copywriter?
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Yu Hao
• 18d
Hey, your review will help me alot. Thank you.
Nich in fitness
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QGaM90QCP9XMYiTd0IpfZ8mAsJledEfJgdy63dlRhUo/edit?usp=sharing
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Shubham Raina
• 18d
Email in Fitness niche
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GM3mwtczSglPQI9KynQdd4wot1ncXbjDF3eiy-PlPL8/edit?usp=drivesdk
Rate this and Highlight the errors.
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Zaman .Tm
• 18d
need a review
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Nda9cpTZGG8H7UrqBf9aGDC0JZOLMYILofFhe-RCmU4/edit?usp=sharing
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Shilpa Poddar
• 18d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NRMGKp9gwEGa7eUqNNBljTO9OQ9LCcNczVxb2y1EIVQ/edit?usp=sharing
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Alex Dg
• 17d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bwV26EOVbSmIngybbyCDkGzyJlquMbECoaxLFPgw9kI/edit?usp=sharing
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Alex Dg
• 17d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u5d6VuXbLXxLSDlDwZyw6FnGILykeeZcDMw3CMRCD9I/edit?tab=t.0
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Nabil Yimer
• 17d
review this and tell me if its ready to send for client too...
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KU4q1D27Zwglr-bxK27OJNQkhkjyaAUzUaSlBKHvDYc/edit?usp=sharing
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Mzion E.
• 15d
@Nabil Yimer
Hey nebil, how long have you been a copywriter?
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Nabil Yimer
• 15d
@Mzion E.
a while like 7 months now
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Mzion E.
• 15d
Hey biruk, I have seen you in the leader board, I want to give you a call,
Can you leave me your phone number or telegram username.
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Gasparo LeGrand
• 15d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wpasLt_7L4ttGSsWSPTXquoV38WCww1BVmFYzlEucm4/edit?usp=sharing
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Omira Subasingha
• 15d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Tp7BwN3Xfp4ATAYBmcOnbSYKMru0GxxYns_2hy-xJHI/edit?usp=sharing
Give me your honest review
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Ramesh Kumar
• 15d (edited)
Give me a review of the below email.
In BUSINESS Coach Niche.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OF27HjeoBvhD6YSGLOeytV6K2OzZ536gLmcIzsiqcqU/edit?usp=drivesdk
You can also rate my email from 1-10
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Aryan Singh
• 15d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1En57xhz2WzEh32kIhyr33Fy3WwVFSiqwKBRk93uyMPo/edit?tab=t.0
review guys
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Zotha Ntuli
• 14d
@Biruk Habesha
brotherman I need you to be brutally honest like always
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_yfgVl6klT_nm0SHtDkihs-VEcUNi2Z1jETMv0UxBII/edit?usp=sharing
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Aryan Singh
• 13d
fitness niche
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c4H2F6qsP00mUbk4HfmPE_WqEW3UkkGwYY5PjZPaeyg/edit?tab=t.0
review and rate it
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Zaid Haroon
• 12d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GiwFgPuK6QEMCyHkKay742LAnHq4ym5Rq4KlKMVKz2k/edit?usp=sharing
Don't hold back
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Aryan Singh
• 12d
fitness niche
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PFckqGO9IpHhNTf-p7JjPPW2BVCnIFrHRR8rDN5uIxw/edit?tab=t.0
give a honest review
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Igor Tenorio
• 12d
come to see my new piece of copy * cof *
Pls, give provide a rating + feedback for the newbie here, gotta learn the blind spots I'm leaving
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IP2_PCGoalDMEWf22e6FmjKi9a4JT8Q8VEC1zmh7v60/edit?usp=sharing
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Jaden Osi
• 12d
MY ECOM COPY
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18l5Bjtg6rXoLx_nv3TLXrsCdaTw8a0cC-yHMTfwUZmg/edit?tab=t.0
also could you guys follow my insta @osim.uwa so when i start outreaching I dont look like a bot, ive got 2 post copyriting related so you know im not just asking just for followers oh yeah its a new account aswell forgot to add
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Zotha Ntuli
• 11d
@Biruk Habesha
brother here is my copy
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NVI68mUV8dbqU_P7QFGR_hskNzLi8A3JAIkr9H-1Tdc/edit?usp=sharing
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Rayyan Bin Raheel
• 11d
4th email for a welcome sequence.
Kindly review and rate out of 10.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19aFTdyTRT66CrxsMa4P7l5WnvAvLKdpoo4FFF2gjg6I/edit?usp=sharing
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