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waddup
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anybody wanna connect to ig
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here it is
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• 19d
This was written by chat gpt, I wrote the SL and changed a few things
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I can't access
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• 18d
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• 19d
Hey Adrian, I read your PAS copy and left some comments that might help you
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I really tips, thanks a lot man🤝
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i can't access
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• 18d
I fixed the permission
You can access pls🙏
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LEAVE A SOLID REVIEW NOT ANY YAPPING! FIND ME REAL MISTAKES AND IM NOT A BEGGINER ! EVEN THOUGH MY FIRST MAIL OF 2025 RESPECT FOR THE GUY CHECKING MY MAIL LEAVE 1/10 REVIEW AND ALSO PUT COMMENTS IN https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pqzljJypcAvPYNBc6KkaSRNklFX0wcXCxkZucKhJL4c/edit?usp=sharing
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What’s good everyone here’s another email copy I’ve made https://docs.google.com/document/d/16RVcNMhtqWqOdFvcH0U7N_rV7GPEhPj8TEA_W8YBgNU/edit
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8.2/10
1.Perfect story telling
2.I love What in for me in the first 3 line
3.Give some structure like bold in the right place or something
But its good
Keep going 🔥🔥🔥
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Just finished reviewing your email , Check it out.
Overall 5/10
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1."Real estate is like marriage: if you don’t do your homework" perfect line
2.Change SL
3.Add some bold or bullet to break the reader eye
4.Weak CTA i don't know your CTA
5.Short & precise good
Keep going🔥
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1.Content good
2.skyrocketed ,game changer,secret
Everybody know this come from Chatgpt
3.When you use different writing style
Use one in the main part
4.Don't use direct from Chatgpt
Keep going 🔥🔥🔥🔥
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1.Change the SL its long
2.Don't be needy when you say your program is good add some testimony
3.Tell what you're different from other
keep going 🔥🔥
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• 18d (edited)
1.Dead line email perfect
2."in fact, more than 1,000 students have joined and start building their dream
You can hear their stories too"
After this
Watch my students story or
Tell them about your student success
Because the reader need to see result
Keep going🔥🔥🔥🔥
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• 18d
Here is the Not Email (landing page).
Please give it a Mike Tyson review.
Niche- Consulting
Type- Sales page
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6.9/10
1.You're great
2.Where is your CTA
My sales page formula
1.Head line
2.sub head line
3.VSL
4.Click button(CTA)
5.Bullet point in the box structure
6.Talk about my self with side of my picture
7.Scroll stoper with
Belief shift & give value
8.Small bolled sub head line
9.Another scroll stopper
10.testimonial
11.My unique work
12.Feature & benefit that how i help them
13.Give some Bonus
14.Click button(CTA)
15.My price list
&I give them 3 price list & the big price in the middle
Because we always choose the middle one
16.Click button (CTA)
17.Disclaimer/ objection handle
Or urgency & scare
18.Click button (CTA)
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• 15d
Hey Ruth, how long have you been a copywriter?
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• 15d
Hey nebil, how long have you been a copywriter?
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• 15d
a while like 7 months now
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• 15d
Hey biruk, I have seen you in the leader board, I want to give you a call,
Can you leave me your phone number or telegram username.
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• 15d (edited)
Give me a review of the below email.
In BUSINESS Coach Niche.
You can also rate my email from 1-10
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come to see my new piece of copy * cof *
Pls, give provide a rating + feedback for the newbie here, gotta learn the blind spots I'm leaving
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• 12d
MY ECOM COPY https://docs.google.com/document/d/18l5Bjtg6rXoLx_nv3TLXrsCdaTw8a0cC-yHMTfwUZmg/edit?tab=t.0 also could you guys follow my insta @osim.uwa so when i start outreaching I dont look like a bot, ive got 2 post copyriting related so you know im not just asking just for followers oh yeah its a new account aswell forgot to add
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