Hey guys, I'm in the fitness/gym niche.
This is the initial DR offer message and I'm getting 10% opt-outs + only a handful of people that are interested. Should I change anything about this message? I know it's long, but I'm surprised by the amount of people opting out:
"Hey Traci it's Ashley from 123 Fitness!
Do you want a FREE, 12-week personalized fitness & nutrition plan that typically costs $597? We’re limiting this offer to 20 new members and 4 spots have already been filled. This plan is fully customized to YOUR goals, lifestyle and needs.
NOW is the best time to finally transform your health & fitness and feel amazing!
💥 Don't miss out!
💪 Want one?
Reply ‘YES’ if you want one, or stop to unsubscribe if you don’t want a free customized fitness & nutrition plan"