Seeking Sales Page Copy Critique & Feedback

Hi Adspend Team,

New here and super excited to connect with you all.

I'm a copywriter and marketer based in NYC.

I recently made a sample sales page for my portfolio of a fake Tony Robbins Seminar "Life Coach Mastery". Id appreciate any feedback or critiques on the copy and sales page layout. Also looking for a copywriting, YT Ad, VSL partner/ mentor to level up.

Check out the sales page below:

https://telesfordrobbinssalespagesample.carrd.co/

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