@Josh Spalding Thanks for the like

@Chioma Ebele Sorry for taking so long to reply. I have listed a few problems here that you need to fix on order tp inhance the quality of your emails. ( FF: give access to making comments in the future, that way you'll know what I am talking about, when I am talking about it) 1. In the SL you give a big promise, with no evidence, whatsoever. It would be better if you included a preview to elaborate a little, but bottom line; don't make a claim that just seems wrong, even if it is. 2. Your second line is a little long, maybe it's because I am on a mobile device that makes everything seem longer, but I believe that your second lime can be shortened 3. I am not entirely sure, but I don't believe that email allows you in order to make such big font sizes 4. Where's the justification? I don't see any testimonials, borrowed authority, hypotheticals, etc. Put these in your email, it will make them so much better 5. Your pacing is a little off 6. Where's the need? There's no reason to start now. All in all for your second piece of copy, it's pretty good. There's definitely a lot of room for improvement but I did like how you intrigued me when I read the email. So I woild rate this a solid 5/10.

@Magnus Ghias now I think about 20 outreaches

@Thavija Nandasiri Thank you for the tip

An opt-in page for any niche: https://www.canva.com/design/DAGPvFgSiuo/7u5P8O4N0nKIzUe5AwgPSw/view?utm_content=DAGPvFgSiuo&utm_campaign=share_your_design&utm_medium=link&utm_source=shareyourdesignpanel Write your review when you reply to me.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zmYn6zecMYITLcr_dUpar2k0-xMrfKOhNS6h7Q-WFeg/edit?usp=drivesdk

@Victor Wilson show you what

@Victor Wilson how would I help you? Also what do you think about the email on a scale from 1-10