I will like all the posts. Yes, you heard me correctly: ALL THE POSTS of someone who shares a resource with me (especially a swipe file or copywriting book pdf or link to a good learning source, etc.) related to email marketing or copywriting (DM or in the comments). Ciao😇
Comment the link to your copy with editing access, i would review it and rate it out of 10. Make sure to have editing access on too, if you want my approach on the copy. If the editing access is not turned on, i will be just dropping suggestions, but it's best to turn on so you can see my approach too..
@Theo Horsley i saw it , is it an email or a sales page? the SL is too big. z The lead can be improved too. the beginning is not relatable or personalized. And finally write smaller chunks of texts
Most of the copies that I'm reading & reviewing in fitness niche are all same. Everybody using the same angle, it's boriing(I even had to add an extra i). No new angles, not convincing, coping other copies instead of taking inspiration.